I am a Year 7 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Ms. George.
Monday, 30 November 2020
Thursday, 10 September 2020
Wednesday, 9 September 2020
Facts About The Moon By Ofa makalio
this is my poster about the moon
LI. To use facts And get ideas from the Moon.
My Poster by ofa Makalio
this is my work from lockdown. L.I - To make a poster of the green team and make a story.
Friday, 24 July 2020
Thursday, 27 February 2020
Thursday, 13 February 2020
part of flowers by ofa
L.I-we are learning about flowers
success criteria- I know I am successful when I can draw a flower and label its part and write their function.
success criteria- I know I am successful when I can draw a flower and label its part and write their function.
Measurement - by Ofa
learning Intention- W.A.LT.to measure Length distance .
success criteria. I know I am successful when I can measure the distance Length using my Heel and toe, hand span and ruler.
A Toss the cannon -(My Toss and Measurement)
Heel and toe-10 Heel and toe
Hand span-16 Hand span
Ruler- 4 feet
B Jump the Plank-(My Jump and Measurement)
Heel and toe- 10 Heel and Toe
Ruler- 4 Feet
Hand span -16 Hand spand
success criteria. I know I am successful when I can measure the distance Length using my Heel and toe, hand span and ruler.
A Toss the cannon -(My Toss and Measurement)
Heel and toe-10 Heel and toe
Hand span-16 Hand span
Ruler- 4 feet
B Jump the Plank-(My Jump and Measurement)
Heel and toe- 10 Heel and Toe
Ruler- 4 Feet
Hand span -16 Hand spand
Autobiography- by Ofa
L.I - .W.A.L.T.- write Autobiography.
Success Criteria- I am successful when I can write my Autobiography using Adjectives.
Ofa
Hi My name is Ofa I am 9 Years old I am born in 2001 .My birthday is on April. kolotita and tuakalau are my parents.my beautiful Mum is kolotita and my hansom Dad is tuakalau.
My strong brother is kolio sosefo leka and Paula.My sisters are Rhonda Liena Uani and Mele. My smart aunty is Liena lahy.
my strong uncle is lea leka. My very favourite Book is Goose bumps in clown street and my favourite sport is soccer.
My favourite subject is RE and my favourite TV program is the news.
My favourite friends are Augustine Sione Sonasi Jacob Mikey Paul and Eli.
Success Criteria- I am successful when I can write my Autobiography using Adjectives.
Ofa
Hi My name is Ofa I am 9 Years old I am born in 2001 .My birthday is on April. kolotita and tuakalau are my parents.my beautiful Mum is kolotita and my hansom Dad is tuakalau.
My strong brother is kolio sosefo leka and Paula.My sisters are Rhonda Liena Uani and Mele. My smart aunty is Liena lahy.
my strong uncle is lea leka. My very favourite Book is Goose bumps in clown street and my favourite sport is soccer.
My favourite subject is RE and my favourite TV program is the news.
My favourite friends are Augustine Sione Sonasi Jacob Mikey Paul and Eli.
Autobiogerphy- by Ofa
L.I- W.A.L.T-to write our biography
Success criteria- I am successful when I can write my own biography.
Ofa
I am Ofa I am 9 years old.my Birthday is on 7th of April 20 is my birthday.
kolotita and Tuakalau are my parent . my beautiful mum is kolotita.
and My strong Dad is tuakalau .
My strong brother is kolio, sosefo, leka and Paula. my sisters are Rhonda, liena
uani mele and fe'ao. my beautiful Aunty is Aunty liena. my strong uncle is lea leka
my beautiful parents are kolotita and tuakalau .
My very very favourite Book is Goose bumps and my favourite sports is soccer .my favourite music is New Edition my favourite subject is RE and my favourite T.V program is the News
My favourite friend are
Success criteria- I am successful when I can write my own biography.
Ofa
I am Ofa I am 9 years old.my Birthday is on 7th of April 20 is my birthday.
kolotita and Tuakalau are my parent . my beautiful mum is kolotita.
and My strong Dad is tuakalau .
My strong brother is kolio, sosefo, leka and Paula. my sisters are Rhonda, liena
uani mele and fe'ao. my beautiful Aunty is Aunty liena. my strong uncle is lea leka
my beautiful parents are kolotita and tuakalau .
My very very favourite Book is Goose bumps and my favourite sports is soccer .my favourite music is New Edition my favourite subject is RE and my favourite T.V program is the News
My favourite friend are
statistical literacy-by Ofa
Learning Intention-we are learning to write a statement about The data display.
Success Criteria- I know I am successful when I can write a Statement about the data display.
Success Criteria- I know I am successful when I can write a Statement about the data display.
Prayer- by Ofa.
Prayer
Learning Intention-we are learning to write a prayer.
Success criteria-I know I am successful when I can write my prayer.
Dear God ,
Please look after my family, my friend , my aunty Who sick and my uncle.please look after my gran dad.please look after dad and my mum. make my brother and sisters Better and my cousin and God please look after me because I did something bad.
The Giant Soup-by Ofa
LI-We are Learning To Ask Questions.
Success Criteria- I am successful when I can ask Question about the story I read .
The Giant soup.
Success Criteria- I am successful when I can ask Question about the story I read .
The Giant soup.
1 .who was hungry . the giant
2. Where did The giant Mother went? on a holiday.
3.Why did the giant caught Jason?because he wants the boy in it.
4. What was Jason doing in the soup ? he was going around
5. When did Jason got caught?he got caught when school was finish
6. were did Jason drank the soup
in the pot.
7.What was the boys name?
Jason
lollies-by Ofa
Lollies.
Learning Intention- we are learning to solve math problems.
Success criteria- I am successful when I can solve a math problem.
Monday, Sam and Sylvia share some lollies. Sam has 2 lollies. Sylvia has 4 lollies. Together, how many lollies do they have to share? If Sam has 2 lollies, and Sylvia has 4 lollies on Tuesday and Wednesday too, how many lollies do they each have? What is the total number of lollies that Sam and Sylvia share in three days? the answer is 6
I know it is correct because Sam has two lollies and Sylvia has four lollies.
John The Hippo
learning intention- we are learning to write a narrative story. John The Hippo.
A long time ago there was a hippo named John he lived in a River with her mother named Ally. ally made breakfast for
John so he eat and go to school
John was at school. he was Doing art. after school John
Play his Game on his play Station. he showed his art to His mother .then There was Two Kids named mark And Keven thay where Playing Tag outside John House . then John said I will play on my play station but then Thay said can we play Two.but John don't understand what Mark is saying. oh you can;t under stand what I am saying and keven is saying two .but then John let them in his house.John let them play first because he know how to share.but then mark let John play instead
A long time ago there was a hippo named John he lived in a River with her mother named Ally. ally made breakfast for
John so he eat and go to school
John was at school. he was Doing art. after school John
Play his Game on his play Station. he showed his art to His mother .then There was Two Kids named mark And Keven thay where Playing Tag outside John House . then John said I will play on my play station but then Thay said can we play Two.but John don't understand what Mark is saying. oh you can;t under stand what I am saying and keven is saying two .but then John let them in his house.John let them play first because he know how to share.but then mark let John play instead
RE Activty- by Ofa
L.I-W.A.L.T -carry out the church mission of service to people.
2 .People are servings other as Jesus did by
helping the sick People.
S.C. I am successful when I can tell people in parish carry out out the church 's mission of service.
1.People are serving other as Jesus did by
feeding the people Who are hungry.
feeding the people Who are hungry.
2 .People are servings other as Jesus did by
helping the sick People.
3.People are serving others as Jesus did by
helping the Homeless.
helping the Homeless.
4.People are serving other s as Jesus did by
giving people food.
giving people food.
All about Me. by Ofa
Learning Intention- we are learning to write a recount .
success criteria- I am successful when I can write a recount .
All about Me.
Hello My name is Ofa I was born in April 7 2009 I have 5 sisters and 5 brothers my favourite fruit is apple . I have 2 uncles and 1 cousin .I like KFC .I like sports like tennis,rugby,soccer and batmington my favourite subject is story writing .
my favourite movie is the great's show man. I like fruit like apple,orange and banana my
success criteria- I am successful when I can write a recount .
All about Me.
Hello My name is Ofa I was born in April 7 2009 I have 5 sisters and 5 brothers my favourite fruit is apple . I have 2 uncles and 1 cousin .I like KFC .I like sports like tennis,rugby,soccer and batmington my favourite subject is story writing .
my favourite movie is the great's show man. I like fruit like apple,orange and banana my
shellfish- by Ofa
L.I- we are learning to write a argument.
Success Criteria- I know I am successful When I can give my idea to my argument.
shellfish.
What is cockles?
Cockles are shellfish. thay also be found at the beach
Why are cockles disappearing ?
Cockles are disappearing because the people who are picking them up thay are doing the bad thing.If cockle are out of the Water thay will die.
What can we do about it?
I know cockles are found in new Zealand but cockles
Why are cockles disappearing ?
Cockles are disappearing because the people who are picking them up thay are doing the bad thing.If cockle are out of the Water thay will die.
What can we do about it?
I know cockles are found in new Zealand but cockles
letter Invitation By Ofa
Learning Intention- We are Learning to Write a invitation .
Success Criteria -I am Successful When I can Write a Invitation.
letter Invitation.
Dear Miss Thompson. We Invited you to my house to talk about the fencible.
1. What kind of reading do thay read?
2. What class and year are they ?
3.How Many teacher are there?
4. how many cases are there ?
5. what kind of writing do they write?
Success Criteria -I am Successful When I can Write a Invitation.
letter Invitation.
Dear Miss Thompson. We Invited you to my house to talk about the fencible.
1. What kind of reading do thay read?
2. What class and year are they ?
3.How Many teacher are there?
4. how many cases are there ?
5. what kind of writing do they write?
Hulk and Warsaw -by Ofa.
Learning Intention-We are Learning to write a narrative story.
Success Criteria- I know I am Successful. when I can write a narrative story with full stop and capital letter. Hulk and Warsaw
Once upon a time in a tree filled forest lived
a enormous bright Green purple fire breathing
dragon named Warsaw .He is lonely . Because
he had no friends .people think's he was scary. but he heard a sound . it was a person named john he was never scared of dragons so he look After Warsaw . he also gave him food to eat.so Warsaw and the person became friends. and he had a big crash so a Super Hero named hulk so he saved Warsaw and john.he was not scared of dragon like what john said.so Warsaw and john was safe so thay became a family together. the end.
Mission Day -By Ofa
Learning Intention - We are Learning to write persuasive writing
Success Criteria I am Successful when I can write persuasive writing.
Mission Day
I agree that we need to celebrate Mission Day.
first you go to church.
mission day is where you donate money to the Holy Angles in India. I love mission Day Because thay Have lot of games to play. also there are pries and raffle ,face painting and lucky dip . also you watch a movie and we had popcorn.
we had lots of fun at mission Day. mission day is the day we celebrate Because it mission day is like a fun day. thay have drink and ice block. I love mission day . I had fun at mission
day.
Success Criteria I am Successful when I can write persuasive writing.
Mission Day
I agree that we need to celebrate Mission Day.
first you go to church.
mission day is where you donate money to the Holy Angles in India. I love mission Day Because thay Have lot of games to play. also there are pries and raffle ,face painting and lucky dip . also you watch a movie and we had popcorn.
we had lots of fun at mission Day. mission day is the day we celebrate Because it mission day is like a fun day. thay have drink and ice block. I love mission day . I had fun at mission
day.
A visit To the stone cottage- By Ofa
Learning Intention- We are Learning to write a Recount .
Success Criteria- I am successful when I can write a Recount.
have you ever went to a stone cottage before ?
A visit to the stone cottage.
Today Room 6 went to the stone cottage to look at the old thing''s at the stone cottage.
Success Criteria- I am successful when I can write a Recount.
have you ever went to a stone cottage before ?
A visit to the stone cottage.
Today Room 6 went to the stone cottage to look at the old thing''s at the stone cottage.
the wolf and the seven little kids-ByOfa
Question
1 are goat scared of wolf ? yes they are.
1 are goat scared of wolf ? yes they are.
2.how many did the wolf ate? | he ate eight goat |
3.who thru the stone inside the wolf stomach? | the mothers kids. |
4.why did the wolf eat the kids in stead of one? | Because the goat was safe in the fathers clock |
5 why did the wolf eat the kids? | Because he was hungry |
John my dog
Learning Intention- we are learning to write a poem.
success criteria- I know I am successful when I can write a poem about My dog.
brown fur-Black eye-white teeth and pink tung.
like to play with cat and kid's
hate's rabbit and mouse.
enjoy the sky and the sun.
scars of my Dad being angry.
Resident of pamnure Auckland.
success criteria- I know I am successful when I can write a poem about My dog.
brown fur-Black eye-white teeth and pink tung.
like to play with cat and kid's
hate's rabbit and mouse.
enjoy the sky and the sun.
scars of my Dad being angry.
Resident of pamnure Auckland.
My Time With Grandma - By Ofa.
Learning Intention - We Are Learning To Write a about My time with Grandpa.
Success Criteria -I am Successful When I can write about My time with Grandpa.
My Time With Grandma
On Tuesday My Grandma and I Went to the shop and brought some Lollipop Then We went to the
Success Criteria -I am Successful When I can write about My time with Grandpa.
My Time With Grandma
On Tuesday My Grandma and I Went to the shop and brought some Lollipop Then We went to the
How Can you Be friends - By Ofa
Learning Intention - We Are Learning to Write About How To Be friend's .
Success Criteria- We Are Learning to write a explanation using capital letter.
Being Friend's are nice. but bullying is not nice
Success Criteria- We Are Learning to write a explanation using capital letter.
Being Friend's are nice. but bullying is not nice
Fruit Cup- By Ofa.
Learning to write an instruction
Success Criteria -I am successful when I can write an instruction Using Word like First Second and Third then
FRUIT CUP
next lastly and Finley.
Ingredient. lettuces,pineapple,apple, kiwi fruit and cream.
First wash hands. Fruit cup.
Second wash fruit.
Third cut the fruit into bite size's.
then put it into a big bowl.
next's We put cream and mix it up.
lastly we get a lettuces and make it into a bowl.
Finley you eat it.
Success Criteria -I am successful when I can write an instruction Using Word like First Second and Third then
FRUIT CUP
next lastly and Finley.
Ingredient. lettuces,pineapple,apple, kiwi fruit and cream.
First wash hands. Fruit cup.
Second wash fruit.
Third cut the fruit into bite size's.
then put it into a big bowl.
next's We put cream and mix it up.
lastly we get a lettuces and make it into a bowl.
Finley you eat it.
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