John The Hippo

  learning intention- we are learning to write a narrative  story.                      John The Hippo.
A long time ago there was a hippo named John he lived in a River  with her mother named Ally. ally made breakfast for 
John so he eat and go to school
John     was at school. he  was Doing  art.  after school John 
Play his Game  on his play Station. he showed his art to His  mother .then There was Two Kids named mark And Keven  thay where Playing Tag outside John House . then John said I will play on my play station but then Thay said  can we play Two.but  John don't understand what  Mark is saying. oh you can;t under stand what I am saying  and keven is saying two .but then John  let them in his house.John let them play first because he know how to share.but then  mark let  John  play instead