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Thursday 4 July 2019

Alice and the Rabbit- By Ofa

Learning Intention -  we are Learning to    create a story about  Alice and the Rabbit .Success Criteria- Successful When I can create a story about Alice and the Rabbit

 a long  long time ago there Was A little Girl Name Alice She lived with her mother  and her sister.   Alice dis side  to go to a forest Far Far Away . so she ask her mother.  then she went to the  forest. It Took  a long Time to walk. so She  Went to her Car  to drive to the Forest . when She there. she Saw A rabbit .It was So fluffy . 

 Then they Saw A creepy House . The Door Open By It Self  .then They went Inside  the house  and saw a witch  and A Creepy Girl .They Said Why do you Have A bunny?   So they ran out the Creepy House and Ran out the  Forest  and went home  that was scary  Said Alice  Where is my Mother And sister. One day They Came home to have dinner tonight  and about what happened at the forest. that was  scary said Alice.  so  When she was finish   about what happened At the Forest  Her Mother Said to her.  that she going to have her birthday  then they had fun at her birthday  and theylive haply ever after the end.

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